Hey Tewaipuke Its Ana i really love that you did your descriptive writing its Awesome. And i liked how you did two stories at the same time that is a ver good idea. I really liked how you did your background it matches so well with the story Keep the good work up ! P.S check out my blog kpsAnah.blogspot.com
Hi Te Waipuke, I like how you have thought very carefully about your two pictures and what the people in there could be doing. In descriptive writing you would use more adjectives, verbs etc to describe what is happening e.g. Cold wind lashed his face as he struggled onwards, searching for help. Great effort with this, you have written your sentences well.
Hey Tewaipuke Its Ana i really love that you did your descriptive writing its Awesome. And i liked how you did two stories at the same time that is a ver good idea. I really liked how you did your background it matches so well with the story Keep the good work up !
ReplyDeleteP.S check out my blog kpsAnah.blogspot.com
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Ana H.
Hi Te Waipuke, I like how you have thought very carefully about your two pictures and what the people in there could be doing. In descriptive writing you would use more adjectives, verbs etc to describe what is happening e.g. Cold wind lashed his face as he struggled onwards, searching for help.
ReplyDeleteGreat effort with this, you have written your sentences well.