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Monday, April 8, 2019

Today I'm writing about getting my new puppy for the first time

  on saterday I went to get my puppy it was my first time ive got my best dog in the worldan rotwiler  the name for the puppy name is beatsey she is a girl  it is cute it has a short tail the father is a labidor and  mother is a rotwiler  I hope it cost with a labidor so I can paly feach with it I like it when the puppy bites me the dog sleeps in my room I am going to chip the puppy with my paper money so when somebody steill the puppy we can look weir she is and what sreat it is the puppy has cute eyes when I took it for a walk I hope someone dog don't attack her when I feed it the puppy makes when an alam comes off he hawoll

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    1. This is not quite enough for a comment De'Aundre - you need to have a positive sentence, a thoughtful one and a helpful one.

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  2. Hi my name Thomas from room 5 I like the way you take care of your puppy everyday Next time I think next time you need you spell your word correctly so I can read it.

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  3. Hey Tewaipuke,
    My name is Putri and I’m a year 8 student and I attend Paihia School. I have looked at your blog, and it was very interesting. You must have been very happy when you got your puppy because I felt the same way as you when I got my cat. Maybe next time you could work on your punctuation to make your blog post better. Overall, your blog was awesome.
    Keep it up Tewaipuke !!

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